Mrs Elizabeth Darcy

He-- You know him, I’m sure you do, or someone a lot like him. He’s that guy whose voice always makes you look up in case he’s talking to you. ...

Rafter, drafter, be after, chase after, come after, go after, hereafter, lech after, look after, point after, quest after, sought after, take after, thereafter, actor, factor. Most of these end ...

Aww! I really like this! The only thing I can really say is that the dash on the third line shouldn't be there, just a comma. But this poem is ...

Cool! Don't change the content. Keep the content. It's awesome. And meaningful. *bows in respect* Clarity is the only thing here...clarity and a couple of commas and weird capitalisations...but conten

I get a strange feeling from this poem that you dislike math...now where did this feeling come from? If that is what you meant, could you try to make it ...

wrists hurt just reading this poem. Errgh. I don't think I'm old enough for this stuff--thank you for the 'morbid' warning. :smt118 Do you know people who cut themselves? I ...

Romeo and Juliet storyline? I haven't read the story. If so, well done expressing it in a few lines, so that I sort of know what's going on :) Aside ...

Awww. :( So sad! I can only imagine what losing a dad must be like. And the dad himself addressing the son about his loss? Great. Awful. One thing: I ...

Hmm... I enjoyed the poem. The premise was solid and understandable, it had good repetition in parts, and I liked the rhythm and rhyme. *mutters incoherently about free verse.* It ...

A boo-yah! :)

:) Incredibly good for a half an hour under pressure. My scholastic fruits of half an hour usually end up looking like 'and there was this guy called John and ...

Chapter 1: Agrabah The streets of Agrabah are filled with two kinds of people: people for whom stealing is living, and people for whom living is stealing. Somewhere there is, ...

Welcome to YWS! There were several I really liked, such as "I want to see the lightning," and "why can't I have courage?" (I probably liked this one because I ...

Ow. The third stanza. Painfully awesome. One thing--why do you switch back and forth between first person and second person? Are you both in the cult? Painfully awesome. So awful ...

Heard Singing in the Rain? ;) Love the poem. And I really like the last line...except I don't get it...Why is that the reason that thinking of this relationship makes ...